英语中考作文辅导.ppt

5. I usually swimming there. I usually swim there. -ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语. 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall. 这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题. 如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为: 7. Several hours after, he was surprised. Several hours later, he was surprised. 使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面. 8. He had to asked the other one. He had to ask the other one. “Have to do something” 是固定用法 ,不定式后用动词原形. 9. He thought he speak well. He thought he spoke well. 这个句子属于语法时态的不一致. 10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing . Mr. Li is from Beijing . 一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词. 11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese. He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese. 首先要区分hard 和 hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别. He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大. 其次,be 动词后面不能使用副词. 12. This film is very good-looking . This film is very interesting. 这是一个完全中文式的英语句子. good-looking 一般用来形容人物的. 13. It is very good to family look. It is fit for family to enjoy. 又是一个中文式的句子 14. I think we can’t live Internet. I think we can’t rely on Internet. 学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网. 15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people. Most people use the net to send the mails. 这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译. 16. I have a future dream. I have a dream about future. Future 在这里不可以直接修饰dream. 17. It can help me to walk on my life road. It can help me to walk on my life’s journey. “人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。 18. I think everything must be change a lot. I think everything keeps on changing. 不细心看这个句子,我完全不了解他想表达什么.但从上下文来推测,我想他想表达世事在变化的意思. 19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do. 宾语从句要使用正常语序. 20. But I singing not very well. But I don’t sing very well. 动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用.一般现在时的句子表否定,如果是实意动词需要有do来帮忙. 21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him. Tom’s mum didn’t care about him. Care 是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。 22. Almost students use the com