2016届名师指津英语高考二轮复习课件第三部分 写作仿真模拟 第一组记叙文.ppt.ppt

第一组：;(一);We rode horses on the grassland and had fun local children. It was very excited. After that, I hold a party and invited some of my best friend to visit my house. ;His mother bought a lot of tasty foods for us, so we also took many photos on the party. We played very happy. I also watched lots of cartoon films at home, that were wonderful.;(一)本文讲述作者如何庆祝五一假期。 1. 去掉interesting前的much 此处very是副词，可修饰interesting，因此much显然是多余的。 2. minority→ minority’s 此处指的是“少数民族的”，故要用其所有格形式。 3. 在fun后加with 固定短语have fun with意为“和……玩得开心”。 4. excited→ exciting 因“物”作主语要用 -ing形容词。类似的词有很多，如：surprise, embarrass, amaze等。;5. hold→ held 这是一篇记叙文，主体时态要用一般过去时。 6. friend→ friends 因some of后应用可数名词的复数形式，表示“一些最好的朋友”。 7. His→ My 根据上一句文意可知，此处理应是指“我的妈妈”。 8. so→ and 此处要用并列连词and。 9. happy→ happily 修饰动词played要用副词。 10. that→ which 非限制性定语从句不能用that引导。;tasty adj. 美味的 grassland n. 草地 the sea world 海洋世界 ride horses 骑马 have fun 玩得开心 after that 之后 take photos 照相 cartoon films 动画片;(二);We are told that our rooms hadn’t been reserved for that week, but for the week after. I didn’t understand what this would happen and my credit card had already been charged with the reservation. ;What’s bad, the hotel had been fully booked. When we were wondering what to do with, the manager came out. She apologized and gave them a spare VIP room on the top floor.;(二)本文讲述去年我和哥哥去北京度假的时候在旅馆发生的一个误会，最后旅馆经理出面解决了误会。 1. 在vacation前加a 由固定搭配for a vacation意为“度假”可知，且vacation是可数名词，故要加a。 2. landing→ landed 此处land(着陆)作谓语，根据全文语境可知要用过去时。 3. month→ months 由前面的six可知要用复数形式。 4. they→ there 此处是there be句型。 5. are→ were 本文是记叙文，主体时态是一般过去时。;6. what→ why 引???宾语从句，由语境逻辑可知，此处应该是指“为什么会发生这种事”。故用why合适。 7. with→ for 由固定短语charge sb. for sth.意为“因某事向某人收费”可知。 8. bad→ worse 由常用连接性词语What’s worse意为“更糟糕的是”可知。 9. 去掉what to do后的with 此处what to do作宾语，意为“该怎么办”，with显然是多余的。 10. them→ us 由文意可知，gave的对象应该是“我们”，而不是“他们”。;reservation n. 预订 charge vt. 收费 book vt. 预订 spar