半开放性作文PPT.ppt

体裁 人称 时态 要点 ★ 覆盖所有内容要点 ★ 运用较多的语法结构和词汇，有些 许错误 ★ 有效地运用了连接成分 英语高分作文基本特点 1.完成试题所有任务，覆盖所有的内容要点 2.用较多语法结构（如名词性从句，状语从句，定语从句，非谓语，倒装等）与词汇（高级词汇与高级句型）语言地道，语法错误少，有亮点等。 3.思路清晰，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 4.语法结构和词汇方面有些许错误，但为了尽量使用较复杂结构或高级词汇，具备较强的语言运用能力。 高分作文参考标准： Clean Complete 结构和内容 Coherent Changeable Correct Check 高级词汇的使用 1.Our school lies in the east of the city . Our school is located in the east of the city . 2.I can not find any way to solve the problem . I can not find any solution to the problem . 3.Suddenly ,I had a good idea . A good idea (suddenly) occurred to/hit /struck me . 4.He speaks good English . He speaks perfect English . He speaks English fluently. 短语取代单词 1.Suddenly ,I had a good idea . Suddenly ,I came up with a good idea . 2.Everyone should do his or her best to protect the environment . Everyone is supposed to do his or her best to protect the environment. 5.We should try to improve our Engish. We should spare no effort to improve our English. We should do what/whatever we can to improve our English. We should do everything/all we can to improve our English. 应用较多较复杂的语法结构 1.We were tired .We felt happy. We were tired, but we felt happy. Though/Although we were tired ,we felt happy. Tired as /though we were ,we felt happy. (Though) tired, we felt happy. 2.Work hard and you will succeed in time . If you work, you will succeed in time . Working hard , you will succeed in time. 7.If weather permits,we will go to the park for a picnic next Sunday. Weather permitting, we will go to the park for a picnic next Sunday. 8.We are studying hard and all the lights are on . We are studying hard with all the lights on. 9.Ms Li is standing there.She is teaching us English. Ms Li, who is standing there, is teaching us English. Standing there is Ms Li,who is teaching us English. 10.We all know t