满分GRE写作范文赏析分享(argument44)-智课教育旗下智课教育.pdf

智 课 网 G R E 备 考 资 料 满分GRE写作范文赏析分享(argument44)-智课教育旗 下智课教育 下面，小编要为大家推荐的是，考生可以通过研究 GRE写作 范文来提高自己的写作水平。 【题目】 The following appeared in a newsletter distributed at a recent political rally: Over the past year, the Consolidated Copper Company (CCC) has purchased over one million square miles of land in the tropical nation of West Fredonia. Mining copper on this land will inevitably result in pollution and environmental disaster, since West Fredonia is home to several endangered animal species. But such disaster can be prevented if consumers simply refuse to purchase products that are made with CCCs copper until the company abandons its mining plans. 【第1段】 The author of this excerpt concludes that if consumers refuse to buy products made with Consolidated Copper Company (CCC) copper the company will abandon its mining plans in the nation of West Fredonia. No other evidence or assumptions are presented in this argument but let us examine it further. 【本段结构】 本段采用了标准的Argument开头段结构，即：C- F的开头结构， 首句概括原文的C(Conclusion)。最后尾句中给出开头段到正文段的过 渡句，指出原文在逻辑上存在F(Flaw)。 【本段功能】 本段作为Argument开头段，具体功能就在发起攻击。首先，概括 原文的结论：West Fredonia的居民可以通过抵制CCC商品来使其放弃 在当地的采矿业务。接下来，作者提出，原文并没有其他的Evidence。 最后点出原文需要further examine，引出后面的分析。 【第2段】 Essentially, the author provides no evidence in this argument. For example, there is no proof indicating that the West Fredonia land that CCC has acquired the land for the purpose of mining or investing. In consideration of the amount of total land purchased, it is not clear if the land is relatively significant. There is no clear evidence indicating that the land is inhabited by endangered animal species. Barring the presentation of evidence, the author of the excerpt above doesn’t have a leg to stand on. 【本段结构】 本段采用了标准的Argument正文段结构，即：概括第一个逻辑错 误的错误类型和原文犯错位置，接下来给出合理的理由和他因来反驳原 文。 【本段功能】 本段作为正文第一段，攻击文章犯的主要逻辑错误：因果类错