2014年4月12日托福写作真题第二套题.docx

2014年4月12日托福写作真题第二套题智课网整理综合写作：Topic议题Electronic medical records电子医药记录ReadingListeningThesis总论点For.支持Against.反对Sub-point 1分论点1Reducing cost减少开销It cannot significantly reduce the cost because doctors who use electronic medical records will still have paper record backup with signatures on it. 不能 减少花销因为那些用电子版的医生会有纸质版的备份并签上面还有签名Sub-point2分论点2Prevent error减少错误。During medical check-ups doctors will take notes and the staff type paper records into digital versions. Poor handwriting can easily be mistakenly interpreted. So errors cannot be prevented.医生在检查时会自己记笔记然后又其他人员敲成电子版的，有些字迹不清楚的就会敲错，所以很难避免错误。Sub-point3分论点3Aiding research帮助研究。Research can be a violation of doctor-patient confidentiality.For example, it could block the use of medicine if researchers have to go through many procedures and permission of patients, which are not generally granted.研究中对病人信息的查看实惠违反私人医生有义务必威体育官网网址的条令。比如要看用药的哈，研究人员是要过很多流程的而且需要病人的允许，但这些一般不会被授予允许。独立写作：The opinions of celebrities, such as entertainers and athletes, are more important to the younger people than they are to the older people.重复2012年8月25日大陆Sample Answer:In this age of rapid technological development, in order to be the most advanced and successful, universities must keep their facilities and resources up to date. This not only attracts more students, but also attracts renowned professors to the university.Students now more than ever are demanding that universities provide the very latest in academics. To receive the most advanced education, advanced facilities are required. A student majoring in science cannot obtain an accredited level of experience if his university does not have the proper laboratory facilities. Likewise, a liberal arts student is equally as dependent on a current library. Progress is the main purpose of institutions of higher education. A university that does not seek to improve its facilities will fail in improving its students.A university that does not invest in its facilities will not only fail to produce good student