【天道原创】“天道名师杜鑫：11月23日托福独立写作考试范文解析.docx

天道名师杜鑫：11月23日托福独立写作考试范文解析　天道名师杜鑫老师为出国留学的同学们整理除了2014年11月23日托福写作范文，具体信息如下，希望这些可以帮助参加托福写作考试的同学们。相关信息请看下面内容。杜鑫老师　　姓名：杜鑫　　主讲课程：托福写作　　教师简介：毕业于北京第二外国语学院，英语专业八级，热爱英语与教学，拥有多年教学经验，熟悉班级授课及一对一授课，接触学生年龄范围广。　　教学特色：善于抓住学生的问题，给予相应的解决方案，从学习和生活方面都给予学生帮助;乐于总结，具有自己的独特方法。　　老师寄语：A great man always willing to be little.—— R.W. Emerson　　Work hard, play hard.　　今日独立写作考试题目如下：　　Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does. (2011.12.9NA)　　中文对译：与社交生活相比，工作对你的幸福的影响更多。　　题目解析：　　这道题目是重复了2011年12月9日北美考试题目，依然符合今年ETS在大陆出题的模式。从题目的内容看，属于工作类背景，考察的是工作对人们幸福的影响，并且是与社交生活进行影响大小的比较。这个话题属于工作类题目常考察的内容，今天参加考试的考生们应该会感到比较轻松吧。我们切入题目的角度应该是从二者之中选择出你认为影响更大的一方，然后给出三个原因来支持观点。　　作文思路如下：　　观点：工作对幸福感的影响更大。　　原因：1. 首先，工作会提供经济基础，从而保障生活质量，这是幸福的基础。　　2. 其次，工作上的成就感会对幸福感产生很大影响。　　3. 最后，工作占据了大部分时间。　　范文如下：　　Living in such a busy and crowded world, people, in most time, feel that they are surrounded by too much pressure, affecting their happiness. However, different people feel diversely about what is the most important factor that exerts influence on their sense of happiness. The work and social life are on the top of the discussion list. To me, actually, my job influences more on my happiness than my daily social relationships, for the money, the realization of self-value and the time it costs lays the foundation of the happiness.　　First and foremost, the job’s payment promises my life quality, which fundamentally contributes to one’s happiness. To be happy in life, we must have a relatively handsome income first, with which we can buy whatever we need and then do anything we like. Only when our basic demands are met can we enjoy our life and be happy. The job just plays the role of providing fund for other activities in our life. In other words, our social life’s impacts on happiness, which come from the events we attend, are also based on our income from working. Therefore, it is the job that affects more on the happiness of me.　　Besides, the self-fulfillment that arises from participating works affects my felic