2013届高三英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析(第一部分专题指导).pptVIP

 一、简述漫画内容 首先审图 漫画所给我们的主要信息： 图中有两支长短不一的铅笔：一支是白颜色长铅笔，另一支是黑颜色的短铅笔； 长铅笔面带自豪和开心的笑容对短铅笔说“Youre nearing the end！”； 而另一支短铅笔却非常平静。  简要表述 In this picture we can see two pencils, quite different in length. One is a white long pencil. The other is a black short one. The long pencil looks proud and delighted, saying to the short pencil “Youre nearing the end！” The short pencil remains calm.  挖掘图中隐藏的要点使图画描述连贯。 长短铅笔对短铅笔所说的话的隐含的意思是：对短铅笔的嘲笑。 His words mean laughing at the short pencil. 短铅笔为什么那样平静? 有可能是：长铅笔的话让它陷入沉思。再进一步追问下去“沉思什么”? 比如说：自己曾经做出的贡献、现在老了但是过着幸福的生活等等。  连贯成篇 In this picture we can see two pencils, quite different in length, forming a sharp contrast. The long pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the short pencil by saying “You’re nearing the end!” . The short pencil, on the other hand, remains clam. The long pencil’s words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. It’s true that he’s approaching the end but he has been living a happy life.  二、点明漫画实质 从不同角度去看，就有不同的对漫画实质的理解。 如：从“长短”上看：“长”是年轻的象征，“短”是老的象征。无论是人还是物都有“新旧”“老少”的时候。“长”有它的短处，“短”也有它的长处。由此我们可以得出结论：人无论长幼有自身的优点也有自身的弱点。 The picture seems to tell us that everyone is a combination of strengths and weaknesses. 还有如果从“短铅笔”对别人的嘲笑保持平静上看，我们不难得出：不理会别人的嘲笑，自信地过自己的生活。  三、发表个人看法 围绕对漫画实质的理解发表个人的看法：年轻人在自信的同时请不要忽视学习老年人的长处。 When feeling confident about our own strength, we, the young, should never ignore the advantages of the old, who are surely in some way more experienced, practiced and skilled than us. We may be expert in one particular area, yet its impossible for us to be accomplished in all respects.  【参考范文】1 （官方提供） I think the long pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the short pencil by saying “Youre nearing the end！”The short pencil, on the other hand, remains calm. The long pencils words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing