应试必备-六级复习资料.ppt

应试必备:英语四级六级作文点睛(一) 改词扩句——不改变原句的意思，仅通过词汇、语法手段使句子看起来更高级、地道。下面请看例子： 例1Others think that the utilization of waste products will be eliminated sooner or later with the emergence of hi-te . However, I did not consider that factor carefully. Because I hold the view that waste materials can be made good use of to help reduce the living cost.原句：I did not consider that factor carefully.改句：I fail to take that factor into careful consideration.【解析】在这个简单句中，主要做了两个改变，一是把did not改成fail to, 同样的意思，可是词汇应用的灵活度却大大提高。二是把consider…carefully改成了take sth into careful consideration，在考场作文中，词组的运用是个亮点，而且英语中静态居多（名词用的多），汉语中动态居多（动词用的多），在此把动词consider变成名词consideration，顿时使英文更加地道。 例2 原句： You are enthusiastic and enterprising. And you are one of the most talented and diligent in our department. You have already won 2 awards for good academic results. 改句： You, enthusiastic and enterprising,are one of the most talented and diligent in our department,already winning 2 awards for outstanding academic results. 【解析】 我们可以看到例句中有3个简单句，咋看上去给人一种啰嗦、累赘的感觉。但细看之下，不难发现3个句子的主语全部是you，因此我们就该联想到同位语、插入语的应用。从改句中，我们可以发现谓语从原来的3个变成了1个，顿时使句子显得高级，精简很多。其次，还有一个改动之处为good，这个词是常用词，口语中用的更频繁些，我们可以想一些同义词例如excellent，outstanding等等。 英语四级六级作文训练营改词扩句 名词和连词的妙用。 原句： It is very important for the public to acquire knowledge on Sinology（汉学）. Because it stands for Chinese civilization with more than 5000 years and promoting Sinology can help to build a harmonious society. 改句： It is of vital significance for the public to acquire knowledge on Sinology. For one thing, it is the essence of Chinese civilization with more than 5000 years. For another, the promotion of Sinology can contribute to a harmonious society. 【解析】 咋看原句，基本上没什么可以改的地方，但是仔细观察，我们不难发现原句中的“very important”是英语四六级作文中常用的词，所以我们需要想办法使其看起来不那么普通，我想的办法就是把它转换成“of+名词”的短语，这个名词可以是“importance”，也可以是其同义词“significance”。然后，我们又发现because后面跟的是两个原因，为了让结构更清晰，我们可以用for one thing，for another来分开它们，这样更有层次。最后，以前某一期提过，就是英语喜欢用名词，汉语喜欢用动词，所以我们可以把“promoting”改成“promotion”，“stands for”转换成“essence”，再把“help