英语写作的几个步骤.ppt

Criteria of a Good Composition Content: interesting , important , new Expression: clearly, accurately and appropriately (清晰、准确、恰当). Good organization Well organized All paragraphs serve one central idea; a brief and forceful conclusion; Each paragraph has its central theme and is closely related to the neighboring paragraphs. Within paragraphs, sentences are well connected. To Be Informed and to Be EnlightenedP123 enlighten vt. 启发，启蒙 respect n. aspect 方面 and so forth = and so on 等等 distinction n. difference 差别 in terms of 就……而言 exercise vt. 运用，使用，发挥 be prerequisite to 是……的前提/先决条件 Group Work! Make comments on the following composition and give your advice for revising. Addiction to Internet As more and more people are using the internet, males and females have something in common while there tends to show many differences in some respects among them. There is a huge amount of information on the internet so you can easily get the information you want. Besides, you can communicate with your family and your friends even your foreign friends anytime you like and purchase some bargains at home. However, addiction to internet is a waste of time in a way. If you are addicted to the internet, you might probably get physically or psychologically damaged. The general difference is that males are mostly addicted to games especially online games while females are keen on shopping online. And that’s why it wastes a lot of males’ time and costs a lot of women’s money. It will be an eternal issue if human continue to be addicted to internet. Addiction to Internet As more and more people are using the internet, males and females have something in common while there tends to show many differences in some respects among them. There is a huge amount of information on the internet so you can easily get the information you want. Besides, you can communicate with your family and your friends even your foreig