2011年6月大学英语四级作文讲解.pptVIP

2011年6月英语四级作文讲解 My views on Online Shopping 1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚 2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3. 我的建议 点评： 本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一，互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。 　　整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会是难题。 　　Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology. 　　Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds. They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain. 　　It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated. 第一段 第一段：总述现象并引出话题 第二段：从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点 第三段：给出自己的建议 第三段 第二段 第一段 第一段 第二段 第一段 第二段 第一段 第三段 第二段 第一段 第三段 第二段 第三段 第二段 第三段 Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology. 文章开头要注意 with the development of the internet Definitely ad.毫无疑问的 of course not Come into 进入……状态 e.g. ～force/power/effect 获得，继承 Par.1 Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspectiv