2011高三上学期作文指导.ppt

评讲一质作文 评讲周考小作文 Sept.25 评讲二质作文 Oct.20 第二节 读写任务(共l小题，满分25分) 阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 I have a friend Monty Roberts who has a horse ranch (牧马场) in San Ysidro. When he was a senior, he was asked to write a paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up. The next day he handed it in to the teacher. On the front was a large red F. The boy with the dream asked, “Why did I receive an F?” The teacher said, “This is an unrealistic dream for a young boy like you. You have no money. You come from an itinerant (四处奔波的) family. You have no resources. Owning a horse ranch requires a lot of money. You have to buy the land. You have to pay for the original breeding stock and later youll have to pay large stud fees. Theres no way you could ever do it.” He stated, “You can keep the F and Ill keep my dream.” The best part of the story is that two summers ago that same schoolteacher brought 30 kids to camp out on his ranch for a week. When the teacher was leaving, he said, “Look, Monty, I can tell you this now. When I was your teacher, I was something of a dream stealer. During those years I stole a lot of kids dreams. Fortunately you had enough belief not to give up yours.” [写作内容] 学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“坚守信念”的讨论。读完Monty Roberts的故事之后，你准备写一份发言稿， 题目是“Hold on to Ones Belief”，内容要点包括： 1．以约30个词概括Monty Roberts的成长故事； 2．然后以约120个词谈谈你对坚守信念的看法，内容包括： (1) 坚守信念对一个人成长的重要性； (2) 举例子论证“坚守信念能使梦想成真”。 [写作要求] 1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 title （1 point）Hold on to Our Belief This passage tells us that Monty Roberts, who had such strong ______that he didnt give up his dream all the time even though he was ____________by his teacher, eventually ___________in owning a horse ranch. 2．然后以约120个词谈谈你对坚守信念的看法，内容包括： (1) 坚守信念对一个人成长的重要性； (2) 举例子论证“坚守信念能使梦想成真”。 第二段论述信念的重要性： For a person, belief always plays an important role in his/her life. As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, t