四级作文命题剖析一现象解释型.pptVIP

CET-4 Writing Class Saturday, September 19, 2009 三大写作高分要素 1. 结构清晰 1） 文章框架要合理 一般来说，四级作文都是由三个段落组成，偶尔也可以是两段或四段，其结构和内容需根据文章主题和提纲中给出的段落提示来确定，不能随意安排。 2） 文章结构要完整 一般来说，开头段交代全文主题；中间段围绕主题进行论述；结尾段与开头段相呼应，或总结、或提出建议、或提供解决方法，这三部分缺一不可。 3） 文章主题不偏离 全篇各个段落都要为一个中心思想服务，而且每个段落都要围绕一个主题句来展开，通常是一个主题句再加上一或两句扩展句构成。若有游离于中心思想之外的段落或句子则会使文章显得零散杂乱。 背景介绍 背景介绍是一种最常用的开头方式，几乎适用于所有类型文章的写作。一般文章在进入正题之前也最好有个铺垫，而背景介绍法正好满足了这个要求。 背景介绍的开头= 背景概述+背景详述 一般要先用一个高度概括的句子概要介绍某种现象或问题，然后用简洁的几句话对该现象或问题进行稍微具体的描述。 Waste on Campus Nowadays, waste is quite prevalent and serious on campus. Food is thrown away simply because it doesn’t taste good. Newspapers and magazines are discarded, because they have been read. What is worse, students seem to be quite accustomed to such waste and don’t have a feeling of guilt. But waste can do much harm. On Disposal products （关于“一次性用品”的利弊） Disposal products are gaining increasing popularity in China. Now they practically become part of our life: We have disposal chopsticks, disposal clothes, disposal cameras…Indeed we are in a throwaway society. 常用词 万能词： common ; popular (popularity n.) 负面现象： Serious (seriousness); prevalent ; 建 议 背景概述中往往加上一两句表示强调的句式。 e.g. Nowadays, it’s widely known to us raising pets such as dogs and rabbits is becoming increasing popular in big cities. 背景介绍常用句型 With the development of modern society…（随着现代社会的发展……）/ advance of science and technology / improvement of people’s living standard Recently the phenomenon of…has aroused considerable/great concern.（近来…… 现象引起很大的关注。） Recently the issue of …has been brought into focus.（近来……问题成为人们关注的焦点。） These days…had become a common occurrence in our daily life.(近年……在日常生活中时有发生。) It’s often reported that…（据报道......） Nowadays it’s widely accepted that …has gained increasing popularity.(现在人们普遍认为…… 已经越来越流行了。) … has become a hot topic among people. According to the chart/graph/table, it’s clear that… / it can been seen that… From the chart/…, we learn that nowadays… As is described in