我手写我心新目标8下英语作文期末复习课件.ppt

我手写我心 新目标英语八年级(下)书面表达专题课件 By Mr. Zhu 星沙英语 Hello, dear friends! Are you afraid of writing English compositions? In fact, they are very simple. We needn’t fear them. We all know, “英语作文不可怕，不过就是几句话！” Right? Now, here are some of our compositions. Let’s take a look together. And think how to correct the mistakes. OK, let’s begin! 八年级下Units 7—8定时作业 书面表达（10分） 每个人在日常生活中都会遇到一些令人气愤的事情。请你根据下面提示，以第一人称英语写一篇短文。要求包含下面提供的信息。不少于60词。 提示：你的邻居喜欢听音乐，甚至晚上音乐声也很大，影响了你的生活和学习。为此，你很生气。最后，你找到了你的邻居，你的邻居表示歉意。 参考词汇：neighbor, make noise, can’t stand… any more, would you mind…? say sorry. 原文一：(08.2 2007-6-15 8 分) Dear neighborhood, I know you’re very happy, but I can’t stand you and your family any more. Would you mind turning down the music? Please don’t make noisy everyday. Your music sound is very big. It’s infulus my life and learn. So I’m angry with you. I’m say sorry to you. Yours, sincelly, Mandy. 修改稿： Dear neighborhood (neighbor), I know you’re very happy, but I can’t stand you and your family any more. Would you mind turning down the music? Please don’t make noisy everyday (make any noise / so much noise every day). Your music sound (删去) is very big (very / too loud). It’s infulus (It infuences) my life and learn (study). So I’m angry with you. I’m say sorry to you. (I think you should say sorry to me.) Yours, (删去逗号)sincelly, Mandy. (删去句号) 原文二：(08.2 2007-6-15 7 分) My neighbors are like listening music. And they listening music everyday. That made a lot of noise. It’s bad for my life and study. One night, my neighbors were listening music. The music was very loudly. I can’t sleep. So I was very angry. I can’t stand it any more. So I found my neighbor: “Would you mind turning down the music?” “No, not at all.” And they say sorry to me. 修改稿： My neighbors are (删去) like listening to music. And they listening music everyday (listen to music every day). That made (It makes) a lot of noise. It’s bad for my life and study. One night, my neighbors were listen