大学英语六级写作技巧.ppt

3、阐述模式 说明1 【说明 1 】 这个模式主要用于阐述所评论的事物的意义，重要性或危害性。其结构如下： S1 Topic: 点明文章要讨论阐述的事物或现象 S2 Thesis: 我对这两个事物或现象的基本看法 S3 Argument: 赞成的理由因为其重要性 （或反对的理由因为其危害性） S4 Importance 1: (Effect 1) 重要性之一（或危害性之一） S5 Details: 具体说明这个重要性（或危害性） S6 Importance 2: (Effect 2) 重要性之二 （或危害性之二） S7 Details: 具体说明这个重要性（或危害性） S8 Importance 3: (Effect 3) 重要性之三（或危害性之三） S9 Details: 具体说明这个重要性（或危害性） S10 Conclusion: 结论 阐述模式 例文1 【例文 1 】 Making Cities Greener (1) In recent years, while our industries and businesses have developed quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduced. (2) It seems that to raise the public awareness of the importance of making cities greener becomes urgent than before. (3) There are many advantages in making cities greener. (4) First, it makes our air cleaner. (5) Scientific research has proved that trees can reduce a great amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption, hence purifying our air, (6) Second, it adds to the beauty of our cities. (7) With trees and flowers everywhere, there is a: pleasant feeling that we live in a beautiful garden and are closer to nature. (g) Finally, it improves local climate. (9) Examples of many cities have already shown that trees help reduce the temperature of surrounding air. (10) Making cities greener requires more than widespread awareness; it calls for an immediate commitment to planting more trees and growing more flowers. 阐述模式 说明2 【说明 2 】 有时题目要求阐明某一谚语，警句或名言的现实意义，这时可用下面的结构。 S1 Topic: 点明要阐述的谚语或名言 S2 Definition: 用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思 S3 Thesis: 论点句，表明自己对这一谚语的观点态度 S4 Positive side: 从正面说明这一论点（如其意义） S5 Detail: 具体例子说明 S6 Restatement: 从例子得出的结论再说明论点 S7 Negative side: 从反面论证这一论点（如其意义） S8 Details: 具体事实说明 S9 Restatement: 从事实引出结论，再说明论点 S10 Conclusion: 阐明其现实或更深远意义 阐述模式 例文2 【例文 2 】 No Pains No Gains (1) Nearly ever