2017届高中英语二轮总复习课件：第27讲 (半)开放作文.ppt

第27讲 (半)开放作文 (2012·湖南卷)生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文。 主要内容包括： 1)丢失的物品； 2)物品失而复得的经过； 3)你的感想。 注意： 1. 词数不少于120个； 2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 思路点拨：这是一篇命题作文。要求同学们根据所提供的材料，写出一篇不少于120字的短文。短文内容包括： 丢失的物品；物品失而复得的经过；你的感想。可见文章的中心和重点要放在“经过”的描写之中，但是也要描写自己的感受，写出作者自己的烦恼、惊喜、感慨；尤其包含有失而复得的复杂过程，是一篇夹叙夹议的作文。 【参考答案】 Oh, my God! Where is my iphone? I made a call just now on the bus. Suddenly I remember I put it on the seat next to me. Its my birthday present from my father. He would be sad if he knew I lost it. I went to school as usual this morning, trying to stay calm. The first two classes seemed so slow as I was a little upset and absent-minded. During the break, my Math teacher asked me to his office. I was very uneasy because I didnt know what I had done wrong. Unexpectedly, my teacher showed me my iphone the moment he saw me standing before him. Overjoyed, I grasped it back quickly. It turned out that the driver of the bus I often take saw the picture of me on my iphone screen. Knowing that I was a student of this school, he sent it to our reception office. There is no happiness which is better than that acquired by getting back what has been lost. Moreover, I am greatly moved by what the driver did for me. Ordinary as he is, he is indeed a worthy man and respectable. The event will always remind me to be kind and helpful. 【作文点评】 本文由问句Oh, my God! Where is my iphone? 引入话题，吸引读者的注意。然后直接点明话题“我的手机掉了”。接着第二段完整地描写了其经过和失而复得的全部过程。最后一段谈到了作者自己的感受。本文要点齐全，很好地完成了写作任务。尤其是文章中用一些形容词巧妙地表达了作者态度的转变： sad, uneasy, overjoyed, moved, kind and helpful。文章多处使用各种从句，非谓语动词和各种固定句型，几乎每一个句子都是高级句型，读起来流畅自然。 (半)开放作文是一种比传统的“书面表达”限制更少，留给考生自由发挥空间更多的书面表达题型。这样的考试模式注重突出语言的应用，突出在语境中对学生语言能力的考查。与传统的“书面表达”相比，这种“开放作文”对学生构思、表达、写作以及语句的组织应用能力有了更高的要求。它要求考生在写开放作文时，要注意审题，尽可能做到内容充实、逻辑清晰、表达得体、语言准确。这样的考试模式能让考生发挥出自己的特长，有利于高校选拔优秀学生。 湖南的写作命题既有别于北京和上海的开放作文，又有别于其他省份的情景作文，其开放程度介于他们中间。从近几年的湖南考题来看，都是给定了写作范围，但没有明确写作要点，给了考生较大的自由发挥空间。 对于(半)开放作文，同学们写作时要注意以下事