SCI论文写作要点及选刊及投稿注意事项（心血管）照日格图.ppt

RESULTS—Of 900 patients receiving LM75/25 and 918 patients receiving glargine who completed initiation, 473 and 419, respectively, had A1C #7.0% and continued into maintenance. Baseline characteristics except age were similar in this group. Median time of maintaining the A1C goal was 16.8 months for LM75/25 (95%CI 14.0–19.7) and 14.4 months for glargine (95% CI 13.4–16.8; P = 0.040). A1C goal was maintained in 202 LM75/25-treated patients (43%) and in 147 glargine-treated patients (35%; P = 0.006). No differences were observed in overall, nocturnal, or severe hypoglycemia. LM75/25 patients had higher total daily insulin dose (0.45 6 0.21 vs. 0.37 6 0.21 units/kg/day) and more weight gain (5.4 6 5.8 vs. 3.7 6 5.6 kg) from baseline. Patients taking LM75/25 and glargine with lower baseline A1C levels were more likely to maintain the A1C goal (P = 0.043 and P , 0.001, respectively). Diabetes Care 34:249–255, 2011 结 论 Conclusion 这一部分一般也就用1~3句话。很多摘 要只用一句话表示结论。例如： Conclusion Patients who received their first CABG surgery without cardiopul-monary bypass had improved cognitive outcomes 3 months after the procedure, but the effects were limited and became negligible at 12 months. 谓语动词用一般过去时。 Conclusions Exercise capacity is a more powerful predictor of mortality among men than other established risk factors for cardiovascular disease. 仅一句话，谓语动词用了一般现在时。 结论部分，内容上要紧紧围绕或针对研究的目的和取得的结果叙述，不应扩大范围、慎重使用或不用推测的语句、也不应对研究本身进行评论或褒奖(这种作法在国内作者写的摘要中经常出现)。应当“就事论事”。 至于对研究本身的意义或价值，应等待其他研究人员重复或有关部门进行评价、鉴定，而且这种鉴定或评价的结果也不是写进论文摘要中的内容。 “This paper reported application of the new technique in China for the first time. ” 所说的研究可能确实在国内是首次报告应用这种技术，但结论中只应谈应用的结果说明这种技术是否适用，对诊断治疗有何作用等，没有必要说明是否是第一次应用。很多情况下，证明某件事是第一次是很难作到的。 The present study provides theoretical and experimental basis for pathogenesis of the syndrome. This study paved the way to establishment of new treatment for the disease. 这些说法都是空洞的，往往是过于夸大的，是脱离研究内容本身的语句，应绝对避免。 引 言 IN