CET-4作文重点语句及模板.ppt

作文高分技巧 1、卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、构思简单，少犯错误 3、中心突出，层次分明 4、固定经典，名言注目 5、重在变化，宁简勿滥 熟悉老师的评分习惯 评分重点:文章的结构和语言水平 两个基本点: 闪光点和语法点 应对策略: 提问法、衔接词语、从句、并列句、谚语总结法、灵活的词汇和句型、以及被动语态等闪光点. “It is not what you say/write, but how you say/write it that counts for much more. “Give the teacher exactly what he/she wants to see.” 给阅卷老师最想要看到的。 最常用的写作模式 综观近几年的四级考试作文,尽管实用性提高了，但行文大多可以套用: “中心句＋1、2、3展开句”模式。 每段第一句是topic sentence，改编自该段相对应的中文提纲，后面的1、2、3句是衔接词，每句后接分支观点,尽量多用衔接词。 利: 中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考生构思结构的时间。 弊: 忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型, 对策:多掌握常用词句,多运用不同的句型,多使用不同的衔接词…… 时间分配 写作: 时间共30分钟，分值共142分 9:00发答题卡，9：10分~9：40作文 正确涂卡后可以构思作文，约有5分钟左右 先用铅笔写，再用钢笔定稿 审题构思 --- 3分钟 拟定提纲 --- 5分钟 正文写作 --- 20分钟 检查修改 --- 2分钟 考试作文的润色和修改只需要达到三个目的： 1. 拼写正确，看文章中是否有汉字、多余符号、糊乱涂改、划线、和错别字； 2. 搭配正确,动宾,动词短语,形容词与副词,非谓语动词等； 3. 语法正确，特别是人称、时态、和单复数的不一致。 衔接词是文章逻辑关系的体现，可用于各段,且各段尽量用不同的衔接词, 多用为妙. “起”的过渡词：nowadays, in the first place, for one thing, on the one hand,… “承”的过渡词： in the second place ,for another, (besides, moreover, furthermore, obviously, in addition, in other words,) what is more； “转”的过渡词：however, on the other hand, but, instead, conversely； “合”的过渡词：last but not least, It followed that…(由此可见)… ,therefore, as a result, in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion。 Key Sentences for CET-4 Writing 一 ) 开篇 When it comes to …, people’s opinions differ from each other. Recently the problem of X has been brought into focus. has become a heated topic. has aroused great concern. Nowadays there is a growing concern over ... There is a public discussion today about … It is said/ reported/ estimated/ believed/suggested+ that… With the rapid development of ... , According to a recent survey, ... 二) 结尾 As far as I am concerned, +主句 As is mentioned above, we may safely come to the conclusion that … From what has been discussed/mentioned above, we can draw the conclusion that ... Judging from all evidence offered, we may safely come to the conclusion that … In summary/conclusion, if we continue to ignore the above-m