Module3写作课教学案例.ppt

＊高分答卷的主要特征：1. 要点齐全； 2. 丰富的词汇 ；3. 较多语法结构；4. 较复杂句式；5. 语句间的连接成分；6. 书写规范, 卷面整洁。 书面表达常见错误： ★写作步骤： 一、审题：读懂提示语 高考英语写作试题一般由内容情景和注意两部分组织。写作要符合题意，就要对试题展现的各个部分作准确、全面地审读和理解，要审清题材和体裁，内容要点、人称、时态。 二、列提纲：包括选用的单词或短语 三、组句（用哪些句式，各种从句等） 四、连接成分（连接词或短语） 五、检查（包括时态、拼写等） 一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力 1. Many people want to visit the stadium . 2. The stadium is useful. The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended. It left many stadiums unused  1.we can let stadium make sense only when we make full use of the stadium 2. The stadiums can be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits. They can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit. 　We should take the Olympic stadiums into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully. 　The 29th Olympic Games were ended successfully. we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives You can open them for the public. The stadiums can be used to take exercise. ⑹归纳总结 in a word; in short; to sum up; in conclusion, on the whole, in general, in one word, in all, in brief ⑺递进关系 what’s more; besides; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; in addition; furthermore; moreover 考生作文示例 (五档) 考生作文示例 (三档) Tips for Writing Who Where When What Why How How do you make friends easily? be kind be honest ready to help considerate easy-going outgoing always smile respect others be a good listener 学生在本篇写作中出现的错误类型 1.单词拼写错误或用错 2.时态语态的错误 3.双谓语句子 4.短语搭配错误 5.汉语式英语 6. 句子结构不完整 Excellent Sentences 1. We will appreciate it if you can offer us some methods. （王颖） 2. We all consider it effective to train the knowledge points where we often make mistakes. (信佳男） 3. Moreover, teaching method should be paid attention to. （姜雁） 4. Homework reduced, we can do it better and more carefully. （刘松） 5. Only when we spend enough time doing our homework can we make progress. （姜雁） * Designed by Yuan Hao 1、知识目标 通过学习本模块的词汇和短语进行写作，能续写本模块的课文，能熟练地使用本模块所