写作perio 1 课课件.ppt

① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today. 句子表达有何亮点？ 写作中复合句常见的错误 1.只有从句，没有主句 The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm. → The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm. 2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子 ② The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face. ① The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass. 3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然 There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. → Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. ① The hall is different from all other buildings , which is made of glass. ② The old man thought of his son, with tears coming down from his face. 4.过多地使用并列句组合信息 ② We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the bus was crowded. ① It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing. → It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing. → As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus. Three ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句： 1)借助名词短语做同位语 如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。 Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986. 2)借助介词短语做定语 如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。 Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket. 如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。 With th