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Funnel Introduction Wang, Yan Score 5 Essay—Sample Every young adult will grow and live apart from their parents to form their own families. The ages for those young adults to be independent depends on each person. Some people may have to live longer with their parents and some others may not. This essay will discuss the issue of independent life and living with families for a longer time. Funnel Introduction The Funnel-approach Introduction Think of your introduction as a funnel: It begins with a general statement about the topic and then proceeds to elaborate on that topic, becoming more and more focused as it proceeds. By the time you have reached the end of the paragraph, you points are? most specific (your main idea). 1. The attention-getter. 2. Elaboration. 3. Transition. 4. Your main idea. Independent Writing There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative. Integrated Writing Example: The lecturer talks about research conducted by a firm that used the group system to handle their work. He says that the theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate when compared to what happened for real. Part 2 Thesis Statement Score 5 Essay—Sample Every young adult will grow and live apart from their parents to form their own families. The ages for those young adults to be independent depends on each person. Some people may have to live longer with their parents and some others may not. This essay will discuss the issue of independent life and living with families for a longer time. Thank You.Wish you have a good day. Wang, Yan * * Essay Structure An Introduction (the introductory paragraph) A body (at least o