英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--大学生收入来源.doc

英语专四系列：作文之范文赏析--大学生收入来源 题目：Income Sources of College Students 写作要求 According to an investigation, half of the income of American students comes from their parents, ?fteen percent comes from scholarships and the rest from part-time jobs; while ninety percent of Chinese students’ income comes from their parents. What do you think of the result of this investigation? Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Income Sources of College Students You are to write in three parts. In the ?rst part, state speci? cally what your idea is. In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion OR describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks. 审题思路 本题是一道个人观点表达型的题目，表述自己对中美大学生收入来源差异的看法，可以从以下几方面着手 ： 思路1：可以写导致这种现象出现的原因； 思路2 ：可以写这种差异将来会不会发生变化 ，变化的原因是什么 ； 思路3 ：也可以写这种差异反映了什么样的问题 ； 思路4 ：还可以写通过什么措施来消除这种差异。 范文赏析 Income Sources of College Students According to the investigation, Chinese students rely much more on their parents for financial support than their American counterparts . As far as I’m concerned, there are many reasons behind the gap and it will change in the future. 引言部分：作者先概述了题目给出的内容，这点很重要，如果只是简单复述，会留下文字驾驭能力不足的印象。接着明确说明下文要写的内容：原因和未来的趋势 。 In my opinion, the main reason lies in the sense of independence. American students are taught to be independent when they are very young. For example, they will have to earn their own pocket money by helping with the house chores or doing part-time jobs since their childhood. On the contrary, Chinese students are taken such good are of that it is very difficult for them to live on eir own. In other words, American parents treat their children in college as responsible adults while Chinese parents will take it for granted that they should help their children in all ways as long as the children need