四六级作文 二讲 四六级作文中的常见错误.ppt

四级作文中的常见错误 5. 四级作文中的常见错误 5.1. 词层面 5.1.1. 用词搭配不恰当 However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded. In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased. In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%. 5. 四级作文中的常见错误 5.1. 词层面 5.1.1. 用词搭配不恰当 1. However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. However, the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle. 说明：speed 只能和high, good, top, normal, fantastic, moderate, surprising 等搭配，不能与fast, quick, slow 搭配，但可以说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle. 2. In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. In the past the price of milk was so high that most families could not afford it. 说明：price只能和high, low, inflated, moderate, minimum, original, reduced, reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive, cheap搭配，但可以说In the past, milk was so expensive that most families couldn’t afford it. 3. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting heavier and heavier. . 4. In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased. In recent one and two years, the number of people who take TOEFL test has decreased. 5. In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%. In the past few years, the consumption/amount of grain has decreased by nearly 20%. . 5.1.2. 修饰语不当 He neither speaks English nor Chinese. Without television, people cannot get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons. Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has greatly improved. To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice is essential. . 5.1.2. 修饰语不当 He neither speaks English nor Chinese. He speaks neither Engli