如何写好读写任务中的主题句.ppt

赞成 support be in favor of be for approve of the idea agree with sb agree on/about sth agree that... 反对 object to sth be against disapprove of the idea oppose sth be opposed to sth disagree with sb (1)梦想在我们成长的道路上所起的作用 A dream plays quite an important role in our life, providing us with guidance and motivating us to overcome all kinds of difficulty. A person without a dream is like the world without the sun. We students may face may many challenges, such as endless homework, failures in exams, pressure from parents. When these drown us in sadness, dreams will cheer us up. Only those who have a dream and pursue it regardless of any obstacle can own success in the end. (2)列举一个为实现梦想而奋斗的事例 The passage reminds me of the story of Jia Zuosheng, who pursued his dream with great determination. Although he never finished high school, his college ambition never stopped. When working as a security guard at Qinghua University, he studied on his own and finally was admitted to Shandong Normal University in 2011. Jias success tells us if we have a dream, we have to fight for it and never give it up. (3)为了实现“中国梦”，你能做些什么？ To achieve the China Dream, I think first I have to study hard and be admitted by a renowned university. Then I can learn professional knowledge, try to become a all-round person and devote myself the development of our society. I am sure that every bit of effort counts in the process of realizing the China Dream. 读写任务段落之主题句 评分标准及解题要求 读写任务写作（25分） 概括（5分） 写作内容（20分） Lead-in 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。 得18-20分； 2.包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。得14-17分。 3.包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。 得11-13分。 4.包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得7-11分。 5.只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。得4-6分。 2013年广东高考读写任务，第二部分部分(