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高考书面表达训练如何审题、如何遣词造句 * 最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。 1、震惊； 2、捐款、募捐； 3、使李明返校学习； 1、学习好；品德好； 2、父病故；母病重； 3、退学； 师生情况 李明情况 注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：捐款 offer money; 募捐collect money 1、审定体裁、 题材； 2、审定人称； 3、审定时态； 4、审定要点； 5、审定结构。 1、审定体裁、题材： 2、审定人称： 3、审定时态： 4、审定要点： 5、审定结构： 审题提示: ①书信、李明遭遇 ②第三和第一人称 ③现在时、过去时 ④见题干 ⑤可分为两段 Li Ming was one top students of our school. He was good at his studies and always ready to help others. However, he has to leave school. His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed. Correct mistakes if any! 学生习作2： 学生习作2： The whole school was shocked at the news and anxious about it. Quickly they decided to help him out. Every teacher and student offered money to him and some students went to look after his mother in turn. At weekends they went out to collect money. Correct mistakes if any! 学生习作3： With their help, Li Ming will return to school soon. That’s all. Thank you. Yours, Wei Fang Correct mistakes if any! Dear editor， I’m writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school. Li Ming is a student of our school. He is not only good at his studies but also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because his father died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his family. Hearing the news, all the teachers and students were shocked. In order to help Li Ming, we decided to offer money to him and some students went out to collect money for him in the streets. With our help, Li Ming has already returned to school. With best wishes! (100) Yours, Wei Fang 学生佳作欣赏！ 高考范文 家乡变化 Dear Bob,