Key to Model Test 1四级模拟题.ppt

Key to Model Test 1　 Part I　　Writing(30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with A Brief Description of the picture and then express your views on some university students will be looking into medium-sized cities with the high pressure of life in large cities. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Part I　Writing【写作指导】 图画反映出这样两个信息 1 一线城市火爆的就业招聘会现场人头攒动、门庭若市； 2 部分大学毕业生见状决定投奔二、三线城市。 这幅图意在反映当前的一种社会现象，即面对大城市在生活和就业方面的巨大压力，有一部分人开始转向去中小城市就业、寻找发展机会。 运用三段式写作方法。首段， 描述图画信息； 拓展段，具体论述为什么会出现大学生毕业以后有人会选择到二、三线城市发展； 结尾段， 发表自己的看法。 首段 描述图画信息； The picture /chart shows \ displays \ outlines \ describes \ summaries \ indicates \ reflects … . As we can see \ learn from the chart (or graph) …. As is vividly disclosed in the picture 图画反映出这样两个信息 1 一线城市火爆的就业招聘会现场人头攒动、门庭若市； 2 部分大学毕业生见状决定投奔二、三线城市。 As is vividly disclosed in the picture, the scene of recruitment is packed with hundreds of job-seekers in a first-tier city, while a boy who just got a college diploma chose to take his package and escape from this city in which there is a big urban competitiveness, going alone to small and medium-sized cities to better himself. 拓展段，具体论述为什么会出现大学生毕业以后有人会选择到二、三线城市发展； 第一句：It seems to me(= I think) that there are several reasons explaining主题. 第二句：One of the main reasons is that理由一。 第三句：What’s more, another major factor is that 理由二. 第四句：Considering that/ as a result 阐述导致的结果. 第一句：Several factors contribute to the sharp increase/ decrease in the amount of… There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 　　 第二句：To begin with… 第三句：In the second place… 第四句：Last but not least… Reasons 1 the house price is higher and higher and the growing pressure of life in large cities 2 there are so many graduates pouring into the society every year that it is not easy for them to find a good job after graduating 3 the environment of a town is better and the air is fresher. The drawing, t