《匆匆》鉴赏.ppt

《匆匆》 ----朱自清;作者简介;译者简介;译者简介;《匆匆》是朱自清先生的精品散文之一。写于1922年3月28日，正处于“五四”落潮期，现实不断给作者以失望，朱先生却不甘心沉沦。所作《匆匆》表达了作者对时光流逝的无奈、焦急、惋惜，告诫人们珍惜光阴，奋进进取。全篇语言清新别致，自然优美，百读不厌，含义隽永，可谓字字珠玑，句句经典。;匆匆;片段一：;燕子去了，有再来的时候；杨柳枯了，有再青的时候；桃花谢了，有再开的时候….;日子离去,朱译用“leave”将时间拟人化，更能给人一种是因为我们没能珍惜时间而导致时间离我们而去，就能体现出作者对时间流逝的惋惜和悔恨之意，这也是原作者想要借助这些文字表达的意思。张则译作 “go by”,只能表达一种客观的流逝，会给人一种时间是必然会流逝的，与我们珍惜与否毫无关系的感觉。;片段二：;朱译：I do not know how many days I have been given to spend, but I do feel my hands are getting empty. 张译： I dont know how many days I am entitled to altogether, but my quota of them is undoubtedly wearing away. ;….在默默里算着，八千多日子已经从我手中溜去….;朱译：Already sweat is starting on my forehead, and tears welling up in my eyes. 张译：At the thought of this, sweat oozes from my forehead and tears trickle down my cheeks.;朱译：Those that have gone have gone for good, those to come keep coming; yet in between, how swift is the shift, in such a rush? 张译：What is gone is gone, what is to come keeps coming. How swift is the transition in between!;片段三：;朱译： I can feel his haste now, so I reach out my hands to hold him back, but he keeps flowing past my withholding hands. 张译： Aware of its fleeting presence, I reach out for it only to find it brushing past my out-stretched hands.;朱译：In the evening, as I lie in bed, he strides over my body, glides past my feet, in his agile way. 张译：In the evening, when I lie on my bed, it nimbly strides over my body and flits past my feet.;…我掩着面叹息，但是新来的日子的影儿又开始在叹息里闪过了…;总结;（3）文章翻译应建立在对整篇文章情感基调的整体把握上，如withhold与out-stretch两词语的使用，显示出译者对整篇文章的基调??握程度。此处原文作者表达出对时光匆匆流逝的惋惜焦虑之情，以及对珍惜时间的渴望，因此withhold一词更符合原文作者意图。 （4）要注意形容词和副词的位置，形容词和副词的不同位置也会影响句子的意思，如在朱译的in his agile way和nimbly放置的不同位置造成了句子意思的不同。;参考文献