中考作满分模版.docx

作文一、写作评分标准分值：15分难易度：易中难12分容易13-14分中等15分难原则：分档给分第一档：(15~13分)完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。第二档：(12~9分)基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档：(8~5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。?第四档：(4~0分)与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。阅卷老师的实际操作14分作文用词准确，句式变换多样如：长短句搭配使用谚语的使用被动句的使用语法错误2个以内13分作文句型使用较多且正确连词使用恰当且正确语法错误少于3个时态使用正确书写工整规范字数80-100词12分作文– 标准线主旨正确，要点齐全语法错误2个以内卷面、字迹清楚字数看起来不是很少11分作文主旨准确，少要点2-3个语法错误扣1分时态使用不正确扣1分字迹潦草扣1-3分大小写和标点符号错误扣1分字数不够扣1分9 – 7分作文主旨表达不太清楚，要点不全语法错误较多(多于5-6个)字迹潦草、卷面不太清楚大小写和标点符号有错误6 – 4分作文主旨、要点几乎没有找到只有个别句子能看懂字数明显不够3 – 0分作文几乎白卷，有几个单词拼对了 3分写字了，但是一个也看不懂 2分交白卷 0分：1. 作文中人称不明确，扣2分。2. 文章时态出问题，1-2个错扣1分，3-5个错扣2分，最高可扣4分。3. 学生感悟与文章所写事件不匹配，扣3分。4. 写作不分段，扣5分。5. 字迹潦草，字迹不清楚，根据程度，可扣1-2分。6. 文章详略不当，可扣1-3分。7. 第一段仅一句话，对于题目第一个问题回答过于简单，扣1分。8. 文章缺少要点，扣5分。9. 文章没有结尾，扣1分。三、可套句型及所用范围(按近几年考查话题多少排序)一、校园生活与友谊 (所用范围：写人、记事)1. 开头段xxx, who is a 15-year-old student, is an outgoing and kind-hearted boy/girl. My best friend is a boy/girl named xxx,2who is 15 years old this year.We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend--xxx.2. 中间段 (人物具体介绍部分)外形、性格特点及爱好He’s/she’s of medium height and wears glasses. He/she is outgoing and hardworkingand is always ready to help others.He/she is active, cute and energetic.He’s/she’s not only kind but also helpful.Besides, he/she is friendly and enthusiastic. He/she has a lot of interests and xxx and xxx are his/her favorite.朋友做的事情xxx is a top student, to realize his/her dream, whodevoted himself /herself to his/her studies.Once I saw him help an old woman cross the road.I have a crystal clear memory that he/she used to give me a helping hand (help me out) whenever I was in trouble.We get on well with each other so we often discuss our study together and he/she can always find out new ways to help me work out problems.3. 尾段Such is xxx, a warm-hearted and outgoing boy/girl. He/she is so good a boy/girl as everyone likes.I’m proud of having such an