2017高考英语写作训练(语法与写作+写作模板+评分标准).doc

写作训练（1）——语法与写作 名 词 【常见问题】 对于名词，学生在实际写作应用中主要存在以下常见问题： 1．写作中对于复数名词易疏漏-s或-es，如 Id love to make friend with you. (误) All the picture displayed are of great value. (误) 2: familys, knifes, difficulttys, pinaoes, heros, woman doctors, tooths, childrens, medias。 3．部分词性易混作名词，如： 动词误作名词 形容词误作名词 动词 名词 形容词 名词 succeed success honest honesty affect effect healthy health Through your constant effort, you will success sooner or later. (误) Taking regular exercise can benefit our healthy. (误) 4．可数与不可数名词混淆。如： 不可数 可数 take action take measures some advice suggestions take exercise eye exercises make progress information It is high time we took actions to reduce the factors contributing to global warming. (误) Without your help, I wouldnt have made progresses in English. (误) 【【写作词汇升级】】运用高级词汇或替换划线部分内容 1. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’ s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In return/reply, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels. →Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels. 2. I often read your newspaper. →I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. 3. Im really interested in this job and hope I can work for you. →I’m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you. 4. Thus I began to recognize the advantages of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class. →Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class. 5. As is known to all, as people’s living standards improve, cars have become a popular means of transport, and is very convenient to our life. →As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. 6. Most Chinese mothers are not in favor of what the writer did.