北京高考书面表达系列训练之一.ppt

第一讲高考作文满分标准+写人记叙文（上） 高考八大满分评分标准 2006北京 国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平，友爱”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。 姓名：王珊 性别：女 年龄：16岁 学校：北京阳光中学 其他：爱好音乐，摄影；善于与人交流，乐于助人；热爱自然，热爱和平 参加夏令营的目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化 注意：1. 词数不少于60。 2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 （请将情景作文写在答题卡Ⅱ指定区域内） 2007全国 第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括： 1.年龄； 2.性别； 3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 注意：1．词数100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. __________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua Model:满分范文素材 When I began studying at my middle school three years ago, I was introduced to Sara Smith, the school’s headmistress. ? Her smart appearance and warm, friendly expression made me like her immediately. She is a small-boned, smiling woman in her early fifties, with twinkling blue eyes and soft, silver curls. Although she dresses simply, she always manages to look elegant. ? She is a very fair-minded person who treats everyone at the school with equal respect. Despite clasping (攥紧)her hands nervously when she is upset, she is usually very calm, which is shown by her ability to keep her temper in the most difficult situations. Her quiet voice and gentle, caring manner make her popular with the children. Ms Smith had no children of her own; however, she says that she feels like a mother of the children in her school. In fact, she has no time for family life, since she dedicates her life to her job. Besides taking care ofvarious administrative(管理的) tasks every day, she always takes time to talk to the teachers and parents. To my mind, Sara Smith is a dedicated professional who is a wonderful role model, not only for the children but also for the teachers as well. Describing a Person 掌握五大常见写作技法： 定语从句 追加说明 因果 转折 举例 structure Introduction: Main body Conclusion Introduction: 1) Who the person is 2) How/Where did you know him 第一段模板：framework ? When I began studying at m