写作指导offer suggestions.ppt

Writing Instruction —— offer suggestions Steps of writing Step 1. 审题 文体： 阅读对象(语气)： 时态： 人称 框架： （分段详略） 假如你是高二某班的一名班长。你所在班级的关系总体上很好，师生如同朋友，同学如同兄弟姐妹；但是，也存在一些问题，如有时因为学习压力大，有些同学容易发火导致和其他同学吵架，有时不听老师或家长的劝告等。针对这个情况，你在一次班会上首先介绍了当前的实际情况：好的方面和不够好的方面；然后向同学们提出了一些建议（至少两条）。 Dear classmates, Today, I would like to say something about the relationship between students in our class. Generally speaking, the relationship between student is good. … Step 1. 审题 文体： 阅读对象： 时态： 人称 框架： （分段详略） 演讲稿（夹叙夹议） 同学。语体：亲切 一般现在时 We Step 2: 列提纲,译要点，初步成句 Para1： description Para2: suggestion Good aspect: 关系好，如朋友如兄弟姐妹 Bad aspect: (however) 压力大易发火吵架，不听师长劝告 Good aspects: get along well with assist /help with … like brothers and sisters regard/ treat …as Bad aspects: stressed out, heavy burden bad-tempered lose one’s temper argue, quarrel, conflict with…, Ignore… turn deaf ear to… take no notice of... Description成句(简明，运用词组句型) 1. We treat each other sincerely as if we were family. Therefore, our class is always brimful of warmth. 2. As we can see, students in our class get on well with each other, and we also make friends with teachers as well. 3. The class has become a family and provides us with a comfortable study atmosphere. 4. With the heavy burden of study, some of us become bad-tempered, and sometimes refuse to follow the advice from parents and teachers. 5. Due to the stressful school life, some of us may easily be possessed by anger and get into conflict with others. Sometimes, we are likely to turn a deaf ear to our teachers and parents. Suggestions: (group work——report) 1. chat with friends, find an outlet 2. appeal to …for help when get into trouble 3. do sports, regular exercise, to refresh your mind, to build up your mind and body as well. 4. get good sleep 5. think twice before you act 6. listen to light music, get relaxed …. Sentence patterns for giving suggestions You should… I suggest that you (should) Why not / why don’t… You’d better do… It’s better to do…/ it’s best to