四级介绍和经典句型的.ppt

Writing ;Diagnosis: Why many students fail to write well ;Illogical in writing unreasonable in planning;As far as I am concerned, factors leading to this social phenomenon can be listed as follows. First, with science and technology developing so rapidly today, more knowledge means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion. As an old saying points out, an investment in knowledge always pays the best interest. ;Therefore, a diploma is always regarded as a passport to personal advancement. Besides this, there is one more point I think I ought to mention. As the largest developing country in the world, if our country is to consolidate its feet on the world stage, it must start right now to lay a solid foundation for the development of its knowledge economy. ;In conclusion, nowadays people get crazy for diplomats just as a result of intention that they can find a good job. Nonetheless, a diploma does not necessarily mean that you are competent for the job. Hence, a diploma is something but not everything. In other words, what really counts is to be aware how to put what you have learned into practice. ;Simple in sentence structure;Confidence important. Confidence is important. Confidence is very, very and very important. ;The pretty girl who is standing on the platform quietly, with her shiny hair flowing gently in the breeze, is my first love, whose sweet smile I will never forget, though I don’t think she is the right person for me to marry. ;Confidence is of vital importance. It is of vital importance for young students to be confident. Whether we can achieve success or not depends, to some extent, on whether we are confident or not. Confidence is the key to success. We can live without money while we cannot live without confidence. 英语句子语法逻辑性和主从层次感;Limited in vocabulary ;;VERY使用过度： I am a college student and my home is very far from the college, so I have to live in a dormitory. And one of my dormmates is very, a very energetic girl. She is a