2017届四川省高一英语必修二：Book2Module2《Writing-smoking》课件（外研版）.pptVIP

全优中高考网 全优中高考网 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 如何写“吸烟的危害”的英语短文 【案例呈现】 请根据下表内容, 写一篇以“Students, give up smoking”为题的英语短文。 现状 不少学生吸烟，而且人数还在增加；某校2/5以上学生吸烟，有的学生还偷钱买烟。 危害 学生吸烟危害比成人更大，它不仅有害于身体，而且有害于心灵。 建议 中学生是国家未来的建设者，吸烟者应下决心戒烟。 注意： 1. 短文须包括以上所有要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数：100左右。 【写作指导】 ●审题定调：这是一篇关于“戒烟”的表格作文，行文主要用一般现在时。 ●布局谋篇: 全文按表格内容共分三段。 Para. 1: 列出现状(present situation): (1)不少学生吸烟，人数在增加；(2)某校2/5以上学生吸烟；(3)偷钱买烟。 Para. 2: 阐述危害(harms)(1)学生吸烟危害比成人更大；(2)有害于身体和心灵。 Para. 3: 建议(advice)：戒烟。 ●常用表达: 抽烟现象：It’s reported that ...; two-fifths of the students in a school ...; steal money to buy cigarettes; Most of them are young people and even middle school students. 吸烟危害：be more harmful to students than to adults; be not only harmful to our health but also to our minds; be bad for; be addicted to; cause all kinds of disease 建议及看法：shouldn’t smoke ...; You’d better give it up; Don’t touch ...; suggest you should do ... 过渡词汇: what’s worse; therefore; as a result; so; for example; such as; in my opinion; in a word 相关词汇：smoker; non-smoker; heavy smoker; nicotine; drug; cancer; cigarette; tobacco, cocaine; addict; crime; criminal; harm; a pleasure; a bad habit; health; a waste of money 【范文欣赏】 Students, give up smoking Nowadays, many students smoke and the number of students smoking is still increasing. It’s reported that two-fifths of the students in a school smoke, and what’s worse, some of the students steal money to buy cigarettes. As we know, smoking is more harmful to students than to adults. The younger a person is when he begins to smoke, the more likely he is to develop nicotine addiction. Smoking is not only harmful to students’ health but also to their minds. 全优中高考网 全优中高考网 单击此处编辑母版标题样式