四级写作例题讲解.ppt

实践表明，多数学生在写作上的主要欠缺不是系统的写作理论和方法，而是最基本的单句写作能力。 好句例子： If students get obsessed with sports, time spent for revision and academic work would be undoubtedly proportionately less. Furthermore, learning is not only considered as pure imparting of knowledge at boarding schools, but rather as a means of increasing the students entire potential. 写作句子原则一：不能太口语化 Parents have to get kids food and other stuff. 长短句 多变句式 1)加法(串联) and, or, as well as 2) 转折(拐弯抹角) yet, but… 3) 因果 as, so，therefore，thus 失衡句　(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重) 　 附加(多此一举)：定语从句，同位语 排比(排山倒海句) 挑战极限原则 : 独立结构、分词短语 长短句原则 　工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： 　建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。 I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式： Not only the fur coat is soft，but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用： besides， furthermore， likewise，moreover 　2) 转折(拐弯抹角) 　　The car was quite old， yet it was in excellent condition. 　　The coat was thin， but it was warm. 　更多的短语： 　　despite that， still， however， nevertheless， in spite of， despite， notwithstanding 3) 因果(so， so， so) 　The snow began to fall， so we went home. 　更多短语： 　then， therefore， consequently， 　accordingly， hence， as a result， for this 　reason， so that 失衡句(头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重) 　　 举例：This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分： When to go， Why he goes away… 附加(多此一举) 　The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu，our oral English teacher，is easy- going. 　其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。 排比(排山倒海句) 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！ 　Nowadays， energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil， coal， natural gas， solar heat， the wind and ocean t