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Ⅰ. 英汉语言宏观对比 十、替换与重复（Substitutive vs. Repetitive） Avoid the following repetitions in English 2. Repetition of words 词语重复 Version 1：We listened to an account of the customs of the inhabitants of the village. Revised：We listened to an account of the villagers’ customs. Ⅰ. 英汉语言宏观对比 十、替换与重复（Substitutive vs. Repetitive） Avoid the following repetitions in English 3. Repetition of sentence patterns 句式重复 Version 1：Now is the time for everyone to come out to vote, for everything depends upon this election. All are against corruption, and so they should vote the Reform ticket. This is not a foolish thing, for the voters can elect anyone they want. But the people must turn out heavily, for if they do there is little doubt that they will elect the men they want. Revised：Everybody should turn out to vote in this election, for the triumph of the Reform party means the end of the corruption in office. If the voters will only come to the polls in large enough numbers, they can surely elect the men they wish to see in power. Ⅰ. 英汉语言宏观对比 十、替换与重复（Substitutive vs. Repetitive） Avoid the following repetitions in English 4. Semantic repetition 意义重复 Version 1：He asked the divisions to give their mutual cooperation to the project. Revised：He asked the divisions to cooperate on this project. exactly identical entirely complete Ⅰ. 英汉语言宏观对比 十、替换与重复（Substitutive vs. Repetitive） 英语宜尽量采用替代、省略或变换来避免无意图的重复 1、Substitution 替代 英译汉不如英译法容易。 Translation from English into Chinese is not so easy as that from English into French. 你不愿意落后，她也不愿意落后。 You don’t want to leg behind, neither does she. 人们认为美国队将赢得这场足球赛，彼得也是这样想的。 People believe that the American team will win the football game. Peter thinks so. Ⅰ. 英汉语言宏观对比 十、替换与重复（Substitutive vs. Repetitive） Omission省略 野心不仅是罪恶的根源，也是毁灭的根源。 Ambition is the mother of destruction as well as of evil. 他的工作是洗桌子和漆桌子。 He was to wash and paint tables. Ⅰ. 英汉语言宏观对比 十、替换与重复（Substitutive vs. Repetitive） Variation变换 用同义词替代： 例如：Mrs. Thatcher, she, the Prime Minister, the iron