Howtoimprovethewriting如何提升写作.pptx

How to Improve the Writing ---- Language;;Compare these two paragraphs and tell the reasons why one is better than the other.;Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. ;Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. ;高中英语写作教学;讨论;语 言 —— 23 逻 辑 —— 8 审 题 —— 7 中式思维 —— 6 内容表达 —— 5 想 象 力 —— 5 连 贯 性 —— 4 结 构 —— 3 书 写 —— 2 细 节 —— 2 写作技巧 —— 1 文 体 —— 1;Vocabulary Sentence patterns;vocabulary;1.At dusk, many people, especially the elderly, are fond of having a walk outdoors. ;At the _____of his death, she went pale with sorrow. ;3.The bus stopped when the traffic light turned red. ;4.One day, they were going home by bike. ;5.They thought it was very interesting.;1.Dusk often_____ many people, especially the elderly, taking a walk outside. ;Small words have great effect in improving the writing;1.We offer hot water 24 hours every day and the swimming pool is free to use at any time. ;2. My mind went blank and my heart was full of anger.;3. Young people don’t want to watch TV, so they pay attention to other forms of entertainment. ;4. When we talk of education, most people think it is a lifetime learning. ;1. Hot water is ________24 hours every day and you can have free ______to the swimming pool at any time.;Advanced vocabulary is the Guarantee of improvement.;1.You can find my house easily.; We all __________________ independence.;3. Suddenly I had a good idea that we could ask Tom for help. ; 4. Don’t worry . We’ll try to help you.;Phrases are priority in improving