Task-basedWriting黄洁贤.pptVIP

Enable the students to grasp how to improve a paragraph. Correction and appreciation: 字体工整,卷面干净； 紧扣主题,条理清晰； 语言地道,过渡自然； 长度适中,一气呵成。 主题句要明确、概括,让读者一目了然 本段的主题,明确本段的重点或观点。 1) When it comes to offering help, it reminds me of my experience happening three years ago. 2) Actually, I was one of those who once benefited from others’ assistance. 1)?总结要点,与主题句相呼应; 2)让读者就本段落的主要内容和见解有 深刻的印象。 3. The uses of supporting sentences: (扩展句的作用) Supporting sentences can enrich, support and develop the content of the topic sentence and they are the main body of a paragraph. Compare the following two passages and try to tell how to improve supporting sentences. The world will be full of love if we give a hand to those who need help. Take my experience for example. Once my bike broke down on my way home but I couldn’t repair it. So I had to sit down near my bike. Fortunately, a young man came up to me and asked me if I needed some help. I nodded my head. At last, my bike was repaired and I was so grateful. It is my own experience that convinced me the world is full of love. On a cold rainy evening, I was riding home by myself. Unfortunately, I fell off my bike because of the wet and slippery road. I sat on the road, struggling to stand up, but failed. Painful and frustrated, I didn’t know what to do. At this very moment, a stranger came up to me. As I was expected, she helped me up and sent me to the hospital. Then she left without saying anything. I was grateful for her kindness from the bottom of my heart. It is my own experience that convinced me the world is full of love. On a cold rainy evening, I was riding home by myself. Unfortunately, I fell off my bike because of the wet and slippery road. I sat on the road, struggling to stand up, but failed. Painful and frustrated, I didn’t know what to do. At this very moment, a stranger came up to me . As I was expected, she helped me up and sent me to the hospital. Then she left wi