作文评讲课演讲稿写作张莉13.ppt

写作（演讲稿） 课程安排： 1.讲评考试作文题目及写作技巧； 2.当堂评改学生考试过程中所写作文； 3.范文示例； 4.类似题材分析； 5.尝试写作； 6.点评范文。 第三步　串句成文，保证流畅 Let’s ride bicycles Hello everyone,Im lihua from chengdu middle school , Im glad to stand here, and the topic of speech is let’s ride bicycles. As we all know, with the steady growth of peoples living standards, people have enough money to pay for cars. That bring more convenience for us. But cars also bring some bad problems to us. For example, the more cars in life the more crowded in life, which is easy to cause traffic jams. Whats more, cars not only cause air pillution but also ruin our health. What a serious problem is, and how to solve it. As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good way. With the globle warming so that we should learn to energy saving and low-carbon life. Riding bicycles can do it. In addition, riding bicycles can keep our fit and reduce traffic jams. Its also help us do more exersise to keep health. So lets ride bicycles to protect our homes. Im looking forward to you joining us. [典题示例] (2010·四川) 假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。 1．过去对成年的向往； 2．现在的感受和认识； 3．将来的目标及措施。 参考词汇：责任　responsibility 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。 Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up”． _____________________________________ ______________________________ Thank you for listening. [写作点拨]： 这是一篇演讲稿体裁的半开放式作文。命题者从“过去→现在→将来”三个时间阶段出发，给考生一个自由发挥的空间，并考查学生灵活转换时态的能力。写作时要避免逐词逐句翻译，除了语言基本功外还要注意好句子的运用，出一些闪光点。 [写作要点] 1.梦想着做某事：dream of doing 2.表达目标：aim to/my purpose is to... 3.有……的责任：have responsibility for... [写作范文]: Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up”． As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now Im a grown-up, but I find things do not go as I