作文试卷评析(上).ppt

英语专业八级考试在线课堂 中间部分 议论文的结构是否严谨，条理是否清楚，论证是否严密，论据是否妥当，关键在第二部分，即中间段的写作。 结构、条理、论证和论据等是八级议论文评分的重要细则之一，因而，写作的时候要尽量符合这些标准。 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 The Body Part 1 Your argumentative topic sentence 2.Supportive sentence the reasons for a view being valid. 3. Detailed support evidence: examples, statistics 4. Concluding sentence 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 作文（2）中的第二部分由5段组成，结构比较凌乱，条理性不强，首句主题意思不明确。 1. China has large territory and population, as well as a large number of dialects, which are greatly different from each other. There are many people still cant speak or understand putonghua, the standard language. Main public places, such as subway stations and airports in big cities, have a great amount of people who may speak different dialects. 2. Therefore, it is necessary to provide service in dialect, so that people from different places, speaking their local dialects can receive the same service and convenience. Otherwise, it is a sign of discrimination to provide exclusive service in mandarin. 3. For another part, people who speak dialects may come across emergencies, and under that condition, putonghua may be more helpful and significant. In addition, it is not necessary to worry that providing dialect service may counter the national policy to promote putonghua. From those dialect speaking people’s perspective, learning putonghua is helpful and can benefit themselves when they enter into public places. 4. Thus, if needed they are willing to learn it. After all in most public places, putonghua speakers are more than dialect speakers. People can use putonghua more.5. Human beings are equal and they have their own choice of speaking which language or dialect. Providing standard language should not be a confinement to people but a tool for effective communication. 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 3. 结尾部分 一篇思想内容完整的作文离不开一个好的结尾。 议论文作文结尾部分的内容一般是前面部分的总结，加上建议或评论。这部分应与前面部分保持论点上的一致性和统一性。 有的学生结尾部分喊几句口号，前后没有连贯性，破坏了作文的完整性。 由于阅卷老师看完结尾后开始打分，因而文章的结尾的好坏会直接 影响到阅卷者的评分心理。 因而，一要有结尾，二要尽可能写好结尾。 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 结尾一般写法 a summa