2016-03-07更新GMAT作文机经-智课教育.pdf

智 课 网 G M A T 备 考 资 料 2016-03-07更新GMAT作文机经-智课教育 智课教育2016-03-07GMAT作文机经 18. Helio city– 3.2 JJ 18 本月原始 Corporations should look to the city of Helios as a new opportunity to start new business. In the recent recession, Helios maintained a lower unemployment rate among the region. Whats more, it was the historical industrial center of the region, and it had created manufacturing jobs more than its shares of the region. In order to strengthen its economic base, Helios is now attempting to attract corporations with large expenses in research and development of innovatie technologies.(by goldenage) 考古原题 The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life. “Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’s unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share of the region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.” 参考思路 1. 无根据假设：H是industrial center of the region不代表companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies will achieve in Helios. 2. 错误比较-时间纵向：错误的假设过去的成功能够代表未来。比 方说已经饱和的资源、过分的竞争，以及可能出现的不利政策，都可能 导致H地区的经济不再发达。 3. 因果关系：expand economic base也不能仅仅依靠attract companies. 4. 因为H地区industrial and manufacturing比较attractive，所以 那里的工人很可能只适合做这类的，如果缺乏能够做innovative technologies and research的工人labor pool，那么很可能导致失败。 5. H的低失业率更可能成为坏处，因为比如有less available work force，企业就必须提高wage才能吸引他们，从而提高了cost。 参考范文 In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location or new business opportunities. To support this recommend