How to polish your composition.ppt

主动不如被动高 Some people say this kind of milk contains different levels of nutrients. This kind of milk is said to contain different levels of nutrients. It’s said that this kind of milk contains different levels of nutrients. 陈述不如倒装巧 Su not only said many mean words to Li but also he shouted at the top of his voice. Not only did Su say many mean words to Li but also he shouted at the top of his voice. A man, who is in all black, is standing in front of her. In front of her is standing a man, who is in all black. 单句不如复句妙 Su Hua and Li Jiang played basketball on the playground. They both jumped up to catch the flying ball. Su Hua and Li Jiang were playing basketball on the playground when they both jumped up to catch the flying ball. Ivy is my friend and she cares about me. Ivy is my friend , who cares about me. 从句不如短句傲 Sandy struck the USA and caused great damage. Sandy struck the USA , causing great damage. After I finished my homework , I often relaxed myself by playing computer games. Having finished my homework , I often relaxed myself by playing computer games. * * By Mr. Gong How to polish your composition Helping others is a traditional virtue. When we meet with difficulties, we hope for others’ help. It brings us much comfort and happiness and enables us to overcome the troubles. Take myself as an example. There was a time when I felt a strong sense of failure. I fell seriously ill and missed many classes. After I recovered, I returned to school, but found I fell behind others. It made me depressed and I couldn’t find confidence. I almost lost heart. At that time, my headteacher found my situation and came to comfort and encourage me. He also helped me with my lessons after class. Because of his help, I made great progress and I owed it to my teacher. Therefore, we should always be ready to give others in trouble a helping hand. If so, we can truly live a happy and harmonious life. Helping others is a traditional virtue deeply