how to live a healthy life 写作讲评 3.ppt

* Unit 3 A Healthy Life 写作讲评 Writing Suppose you are James. Write a letter to grandpa to tell that you decide to live a healthy life. Write a 120-word (or so) essay. Dear grandpa, After reading your letter, I have made up my mind to quit smoking and lead a healthy life just like you live. I will follow three steps to live a healthy life. First, quit smoking.________________________ ... Trust me, grandpa! I’ll succeed! Best wishes! yours, James Dear grandpa, After reading your letter, I have made up my mind to quit smoking and lead a healthy life just like you live. I will follow three steps to live a healthy life. First, quit smoking. Quit smoking is tough for me. However, smoking is bad for health, I am determined to give it up. When I want to smoke a cigeratte, I should remind myself that I’m a non-smoker. Second, break bad habits. I have a classmate. He always plays computer games until mid-night. He falls behind with his lessons. My body, which becomes accustomed to having nicotine in it, so it is time to getting out of bad habits. Third, eat a balanced diet. Experts say there are three groups of food, energy-giving food, body-building food and protective food. Experts say a balanced diet is consist of these three kinds of food. Experts also say they can help us work and play all day. They can also make strong bones and muscles. Nevertheless, I like nothing but beef, fish. Although, it is difficult to eat vegetables, I will try. Trust me, grandpa! I’ll succeed! Best wishes! yours, James Work Show How will you grade it(定档)? And why? Does each part have a topic sentence? Is the article divided into parts? Structure ASSESSMENT What makes a good essay? Dear grandpa, After reading your letter, I have made up my mind to quit smoking and lead a healthy life just like you live. I will follow three steps to live a healthy life. First, quit smoking. Quit smoking is tough for me. However, smoking is bad for health, I am