高一书面表达训练如何写建议信.ppt

 高一书面表达训练----连句成篇（建议信） 建议信 建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 建议信的常用结构如下： 1．首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。 2．中段：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学婉转地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况。 3．尾段：简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。 表达建议常用句式： 1. If I were you, I would …… 2. As far as I am concerned, …… / In my opinion …… 3. Why not ……? 4. It would be a good idea if …… 5. In the first place / Firstly / First …… Secondly / Second …… Last but not least(最后但不是最不重要) …… Compositions from Student Times 假如你是李华，你的笔友黎明来信说他的父母工作变动刚转入一所学校，由于性格内向，生活经历与同学差异很大等原因，在新学校没有知心朋友，很苦恼。请根据以上提示，给他写封回信，谈谈你对如何交友的看法。 注意：词数100左右 翻译下列句子： 我很高兴了解到你现在一所新学校就读。 （learn） I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school. 如果你现在没有知心朋友，不用着急。(if) Do not worry if you have no real friends right now. 虽然你是一个性格内向的男孩，而且生活经历与你目前同学差异很大，只要你遵循下列提示不是没有可能交上好朋友的。（although，as long as ) Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates, it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips. 首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（first of all) First of all, you can make friends with others if you share their joys and sorrows. 第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。 Secondly, you should open your heart to your friends, holding back nothing. 最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。 Last but not least, once you have a friend, you must constantly maintain your friendship with acts of kindness. 希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。 I hope you will find true friendship soon. 连句成篇 Dear Li Ming, I am glad to learn that you are studying in a new school, which is a good chance for you to turn over a new leaf.（适当增加的细节，高级表达） Do not worry if you have no real friends right now. Although you are not an outgoing boy and have different life experiences from your present classmates, it is not impossible to make good friends as long as you take the following tips. 首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（first of all) First of all, you can make friends with others if you share their joys and sorrows. 第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。 Secondly, you