人教版高二英语写作公开课 healthy life.ppt

Writing structure Discussion Discussion A letter to my friend A letter to my nephew Discussion: What advice should I give to him? A letter to my friend How to stop playing games First wealth is health. —— Emerson 爱默生健康是人生第一财富。  细审题，三确定 1. 确定体裁：本文为 ； 2. 确定人称：本文的主要人称应该 为 ； 3. 确定时态：主要使用 和 。 建议信 第二人称 一般现在时 一般将来时 巧衔接，顺成文 first, firstly, in the first place, first of all ... second, secondly, in the second place, next, then, for another... third, thirdly, besides, in addion, futhermore, whats more, apart form, moreover... at last, lastly, finally, in the last place, last of all, last but not least... in a word, in summary, to sum up, in short, in brief, in conlcusion... 写作“一二三”原则 短文中最好有“一”个定语从句 若可能再使用其他“两”个复合句 “三”处亮点:较好的短语(词组),连接词或得体的词汇 Tip He who has health has hope, and he who has hope has everything. 拥有健康,就拥有希望;拥有希望,就拥有一切。 Summary * However…… Some people lead an unhealthy life. Advice from Grandad Para. 5 Para. 4 Para. 3 Para. 2 Para. 1 Grandad’s life. The for writing the letter. Three in which one becomes addicted to cigarettes. The harmful of smoking. healthy reason ways effects hope Scan the text and get the main idea of each paragraph Grandad’s and his advice Dear XXX, Love from, XXX the reason for writing the letter the harmful effects advice and hope Competition Time! Suppose you have a good friend called Dean, who is addicted to playing online games like many young people. His study is suffering greatly. What would you say to him in order to persuade him to give up playing online games? 现象：据报道70%的高中生学习成绩不好是由于迷上网络游戏。我发现你不久前开始玩游戏，现在发现很难戒掉。 危害： 1.伤害视力，容易患上颈椎病。 沉溺于玩游戏，不能集中注意力于学习。 3.游戏充满暴力。反复玩，会不由自主以暴力来解决争端 希望：我认为你该戒掉玩游戏了，真的希望你能像其它同学一样成为优秀学生。 建议：…… 现象：据报道70%的高中生学习成绩不好是由于迷上网络游戏。你妈妈告诉我说你不久前开始玩游戏，现在发现很难戒掉。 (It is reported that… . due to) 危害： 1.伤害视力，容易患上颈椎病。 (d