介绍地点的中考英语作文.ppt

Writing-introducing a place 事物介绍类近4年全国中考考查27次（我们分析了能代表全国考查趋势的79个命题单位316套试题）。其中，关于地点介绍考查4次。 写作思路 第一步：审题（确定文章有几个要点，保证 要点齐全，确定文体） 第二步：列提纲 a.描述什么地方 b. 这一地方的特点及喜爱原因（这个地方如何帮助 你成长或是这个地方如何给你留下深刻的印象等） c.升华感情 第三步：连句成篇，注意人称和时态 范文背诵（一） Beijing is a city which has a long history. There are many places of interest in it. Now let me tell you some of them. The Forbidden City, which is also called Gugong, is one of the most popular ones for visitors. It is very big and you can learn much about the history of China. It was the imperial city in Qing and Ming Dynasty. The Summer Palace is beautiful and famous, too. The Great Wall is also a wonderful place to go. It is one of the eight greatest wonders in the world. As the old saying goes, he who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. It is worth going there. Tian’an men square is also a good place for people to take a walk. I hope you will enjoy your staying in Beijing. 范文点评 增分点1：范文开门见山，用“Beijing is…” 直接提出文章所要介绍的地点。 增分点2：依次介绍了北京著名的景点“The Forbidden City”“The Summer Palace ”“The Great Wall ”“Tian’an men square ”使文章内容充实。 增分点3：范文使用了由which引导的定语从句，one of +形容词最高级+名词复数形式，及places of interest 名胜古迹，be worth doing sth.等重点句型及短语，彰显了作者深厚的语言功底。 增分点4：范文使用了谚语“He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.不到长城非好汉。”使文章内容丰富。 范文背诵（二） 名称 广州有“花城”的美誉 历史 2200多年，是中国古代“海上丝绸”的发祥地 人口 1000多万 面积 7434.4平方千米 位置 濒临中国南海，毗邻香港和澳门 广州旅游资源丰富，有著名的“羊城八景”，现以其迷人的风采吸引了来自四面八方的海内外游客。 _______ ,with the history of ______years, is known as ___________, which is the birth place of ___________________________. It has a population of _________ and the area of __________square kilometers. ________lies________________________________________________________. It is rich in ___________________, such as the famous ______________________. Tourists from home and abroad are attracted to _________ by its beautiful scenery. Guangzhou 2200 “th