优秀作文的基本特征.ppt

2.时态、语态混用 Last night, I had enjoyed a party. The painting on the wall damaged seriously. ∧ was 3.句子成分残缺 I stood up and saw there a boy. The young man running in the street. ∧ ∧ was was 4.习惯搭配误用 I once heard from the animal like this. We passed away the building. of by 5.名词单、复数不分 I made many friend in the summer camp. We can get some informations from the Internet. 6.动词单、复数不分 Our teacher often say that success lie in hard work. Mr. Smith, together with some students, are coming to our school. 7.赘词现象多发 I hope you can return back to our school soon. Well hold a party on next Sunday. 9.基本词汇拼写错误 I flied to New York directly from Beijing. This will be done immediatly. 10.前后人称不一致 The boy was born in a poor family but she works hard. We watched a few movies and we loved it. 11.动词原形作主语/宾语 Take a walk after dinner is very good for you. At that moment, I didnt feel like take a walk. 12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致 Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. Walking in the street, a car hit an old man. 13.一个简单句出现两个谓语 There was no work to do, he went back home. I received you email, I was very excited. being ∧ When ∧ and 14.中式英语 Next week have a party. I sorry you I can‘t with you go Beijing. The family from rich become poor. 6.整洁卷面 英文书写大方、圆润、自然； 词与词间距适当 字母大小适当 无大面积涂改 高考英语优秀作文的基本特征 1、层次不乱 2、句式多变 3、亮点若干 3、巧妙串联 4、蠢错不犯 6、整洁卷面 1.层次不乱 开头：第一个要点 主体：第二个要点 结尾：第三个要点 2. 句式多变 长短变化 主、被动变化 主语变化 同义词变化 同功能句型变化 横向比较变化 一、长短句的变化 1. 时间过的真快！ A long time has gone by before I realize it. How time flies! It has been a long time since we last met. Long time no see! 句式的选择 2. 我成功了！ I succeedded in doing... I am very successful in doing... I achieved my goal in doing... I fulfilled my dream. I did.... and I made it. 3. 你很喜欢这里的天气，我也很喜欢这里的天气。 You love the weather here and I love the weather here, too. You love the weather here and I love it too. You love the weather here and me too. 二、主语的变化 1. 我每天都要完成大量的作业，很是疲劳。 I have to do a lot of homework and Im ver tired.