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你对考试作弊的看法。(2011揭阳二模) (主题)In my opinion, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students’ learning habit.(细化)Those who usually cheat in exams will never treat their study seriously again because they believe they will always get good marks without working hard. Those who never cheat in exams will consider it’s unfair for them, thinking studying hard is not necessary. (四)细化主题 依我看，考试作弊对中学生的学习习惯有很坏的影响。考试经常作弊的人会不再认真对待学习，因为他们认为不用努力学习也能得高分。从不作弊的人会认为这对他们不公平，认为没有必要努力学习。 你对国家“禁止商场免费提供塑料袋”的看法。(2008深圳一模) It is necessary for the government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags. With this ban, shopping customers would gradually form a habit of bringing environmentally-friendly bags with them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be greatly reduced. 政府有必要禁止商场提供免费塑料袋。有了这个禁令，购物者会逐渐养成带环保袋的习惯，塑料袋的消耗就会大大减少。 (五)说明结果 你或你同学的留堂经历。(2011佛山一模) (引出经历)This reminds me of my friend Li Hua’s experience in primary school.(叙述经过) One day, he was talking with another classmate in class although the teacher had warned him several times. As a result, he had to stay for an extra hour after school. 这让我想起了小学时我的朋友李华的一次经历。有一天, 尽管老师警告他好几次了, 但他依然在同另一个同学在课堂上交头接耳。结果,放学后他不得不留堂一个小时。 (六)叙述经过 (七)举例证明 努力是成功的重要因素。 (提出观点) Efforts are the most important thing to help you achieve success. (举例证明)Take Helen Keller for example. Helen Keller was born deaf and blind. However, she made every effort to learn to speak and write. With a great deal of persistence, she finally became a writer and lecturer, who also became an inspiration to all.努力是助你取得成功的最要重要因素。以海伦·凯勒为例，她天生又聋又瞎。然而，她尽最大努力学习说话和写字，由于长期坚持，她终于成为一个作家和演讲家，她也成为一个鼓舞我们大家的人。 文尾总结技巧 尽管写作中没有明确要求考生写总结，但一篇带总结的文章会使结构更显完整,在阅卷时能够争取更好的印象分。因此,建议考生用简短的语言总结全文。总结的方式有以下几种(建议考生熟读背诵各个例句)： [方法一] 重申观点或概括内容 用简洁的语言概括各项写作内容, 重申观点, 起画龙点睛的作用。如： (1) In brief, college life is exciting and therefore I have been working hard to achieve my ambition of entering my ideal university, after which I will try to get accustomed to the ne