作文常见问题[课件].ppt

书面表达讲练 之 赢取高分策略 书面表达常见错误 一. 标点使用不准 1.“ ,”的使用 误:Turn right, there is a building ahead. 正:Turn right,and there is a building ahead. It rained yesterday,he didn’t come. It rained yesterday, so he didn’t come. She failed in the exam,it made her sad. She failed in the exam, and it made her sad. She failed in the exam, which made her sad. She invited a lot of guests, most of them were her friends. 修改策略 1.改为两个简单句 2.恰当使用关联词(并列句） 3.使其中一句充当另一句的成分（定语从句） She invited a lot of guests, most of them were her friends. She invited a lot of guests. Most of them were her friends. She invited a lot of guests, and most of them were her friends. She invited a lot of guests, most of whom were her friends. 2.英语中没有“、” She likes dancing、skating、surfing、boating and swimming. She likes dancing, skating, surfing, boating and swimming. 3.英文的省略号 “…”，而不是…… He said he could play volleyball, basketball …… He said he could play volleyball, basketball … 二. 时态混淆不清 He said he is going to come tomorrow. He is very clever, so he thought of a good idea. 三. 书写不规范 1. 字母书写 “四不象” 2. 字母书写不到位 3. 书写了草、不认真，既非斜体，又非圆体 4. 排版能力较差，卷面涂抹太脏 策略 1.平时多写，并注意养生规范书写的习惯； 2.及时更正错误，避免再犯； 3.注重积累单词、词组、固定短语、　 　　常用句型； 4.多背诵模仿； 5.把平时练习作为考试，培养沉稳的应试心理。