作文讲评-求助信.ppt

2014烟台一模作文 假如你是高三学生李华，今年 高考英语学科阅读量加大，而你的 阅读能力较差，因此学习压力越来越大。 请根据以下提示写信向你的前外教 Mr．Johnson求助：1．英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰；2．希望得到他的指导和帮助。 注意：1．词数：l20—l50，开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr．Johnson， Yours, Li Hua 审题立意(体裁，人称，时态) 应用文，书信 第一人称 I 时态： 一般现在时 罗列要点 第一部分，opening 寒暄语+ 简明点明写信原因 第二部分，body（可分两段） 1．英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰；2．希望得到他的指导和帮助。 第三部分，ending（期待与希望） 第四部分，落款signature 它山之石--Opening: 1. It has been a long time since you returned to America. (瑜) 2. How’s it going with you ? Stressed and worried, I’m writing to you to seek for your help in learning English.(诚) 3. I’m sorry to bother you but I really have had trouble studying English recently and I need your help eagerly. (驰+喆) 它山之石--Body: 4. As you know, I had difficulty in learning English when you taught me. Although I have made progress after strict training, I still do not well in English. What makes thing worse is that …（宇） 5. First , I always find myself lost in words while expressing myself. … Unfortunately, reading is exactly what I am not good at.（知） 6.I’m not good at reading, so it always takes me a lot of time to understand the articles . Because of this, I’m under big pressure.（凡） 7. What’s more, I always get puzzled in reading when faced with(=facing) sentences that consist of unfamiliar words and phrases.（敖） 8. All of teachers attach great significance to the capability of reading. Hard as I try, I still find it hard to improve.（郭） Ending: 9. I’d appreciate it if you could… I’ll appreciate it if you can… 10.Looking forward to your early reply. 小姜与小颜（盐）的作文 Salt and ginger are very important in our daily life. As the saying goes,冬吃萝卜夏吃姜（jiang），不用医生开处方（fang）。 西方人推崇吃苹果：An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 翻译一下： “一天一苹果（guo），医生远离我（wo）” 颜家骥 Dear Mr. Johnson, How time flies! I have not seen