作文讲评3：ways of learning English in everyday life(美术班).ppt

* * 书面表达 Ways of Learning English in Everyday Life 浙江开化华埠中学 王东福 英语是当今世界上主要的通用语言之一，也是世界上使用最广泛的的语言。对于中学生而言，学好英语具有重要的现实意义。学完本单元之后，请你结合自己的实际，以“Ways of Learning English in Everyday Life”为题，写一篇100-120词的英语短文。 时态？ 人称？ 审题 谋篇布局 Para. 1 Para. 2 Para. 3 English is widely used around the world and is very important in our everyday life. My tips on learning English in our everyday life. If you take my advice, I’m sure you will improve your English soon. 过渡句 1. I know some good ideas to study English.(徐珊燕) 2. There is some advice for you.(程馨莹) 3. But how to learn English effectively?(廖颖颖，邓文丽) 4. Let me tell you about my ways of learning English in everyday life.(许千文) 5. Therefore, we should find some good ways to learn English.(周嘉敏) have 6. If you want to learn English well, I can give some advice.(程静娴) 7. There are many ways to learn English.(徐夏娟) ∧ you 过渡词 1. first, second, third… / firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally… 2. First of all, secondly, besides(周嘉敏) 3. First of all, besides, what’s more, above all, last but not least，on the one hand, on the other hand(经典词语) 好词 1. insist on doing sth(邵清雅，余健薇，曹豫，) 2. Make a great progress(邵清雅) 3. Put your hear into(邵清雅) 4. Set down(朱方成，周嘉敏，) 5. In order to(朱方成) 6. Share …with…(朱方成) 7. Such as(余健薇，郑倩倩，廖晓航，) 8. In my opinion(许千文，程伊楚，廖颖颖，邓文丽，孙晨悦，) 9. Play an important part in(程伊楚，吴林忆，郑菁菁，张隽宁) 10. Put up(周嘉敏，) 11. Regard…as…(周嘉敏，) 12. For instance(周嘉敏，) 13. Have a good command of(周嘉敏，) 14. In a word(姜雅婷，) 15.A large number of (叶慧瑛，吴林忆，) 16. Therefore(吴林忆，) 17. For example(吴林忆，) 18. Communicate with(吴林忆，) 19. Along with(郑倩倩，) 20. All over(张隽宁) 21. Be based on(叶慧瑛) 好句 1. It is true that it’s really difficult for us to learn English.(曹豫，余健薇，苏晨，) 2. You should have a book that shout and beautiful, because you should remember vocabulary which write down in this book every day.(姜雅婷) 3. We can set down