作文语言闪光点.ppt

语言闪光点;写作的“六项基本原则” 一、 长短句原则 二、 主题句原则 (开门见山) 三、 一二三原则 四、 短语优先原则 五、 多实少虚原则 六、 多变句式原则;一、 长短句原则 写一个短小精辟的句子，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. ;强烈建议： 在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先短后长； 在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！ 文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。; 段落中的句子常由简单句，复合句和复杂句交错构成，既是为了表达意思的需要，也可以使句子读起来不会呆板、枯燥。仔细阅读下文，特别注意每一句的开头：;Home Computers In recent years computers have entered more and more families in China. Many people find that computer have brought them with great convenience and enjoyment. It is true that a home with a good computer may function like a library, a mini-school, a post-office, an office and a place for entertainment. ; With the assistance of home computers, people can enjoy reading and writing in a new way. They can even do banking and shopping at home. In addition, one can communicate directly with many places in the world and get rich information very quickly. If one is tired from his work, he can listen to music, watch films or play computer games.; However, home computer can cause some problems. Frequent contact with computer at home leads to one’s detachment from the society. Moreover, children who are addictive to computer games will have trouble in study and life. Home computer will be a good helper if used properly, or it can become a killer.;二、 主题句原则 (开门见山) 相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！ To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.;三、 一二三原则 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 ;1）first, second, third, last 2）firstly, secondly, t